evalutation of rough cut thriller

we received both positive and negative feedback on out rough cut. people were nicer than i thought seeing as we hadn't not edited the sequences in the correct order or in time with he music.

A few bits of constructive criticism that appeared more than once was the T.V snow we included in our film title, didn't make much sense... I can see how this is a problem. how we intend to right this wrong is by only including it after a wider shot of the hotel room so the audience have more of an idea of where the telly screen is placed.

On the plus side, everyone was interested in what was going to happen next, so at least we had manged to capture the audience with our narrative, which is the whole point of an intro.

on the whole though, people were confused with the way we set out the clips as they seemed to not flow. and also a title we didn't want showed up on out film which threw everyone off a little. In future we will scan very hard for flaws and mistakes in out peice and make sure the clips flow well.