Good things
Title shots are good & i liked the flashes [overlapped the titles with the tv fuzz very good :)]
Main titles looks good.
Good setting for the theme
Good light contrast
Editing was proffessional as well as the camera shots
Inconcistant, its a good thing, confusion makes you think more.
What will happen; Gets closer & closer to the person who he's photographing
bit like 1 hour photo psycotic & weird
Titles look good, with the letters the wrong way round.

Bad Things
Not sure whether it was in a house or hotel.
Controversial use of camera flashes and fuzzy TV.
Camera shots are quite similar.

C'est Finit !

It is Finished !

The s1-19 Thriller is finally complete !

Eventually, Ryan Booth completed the final cut of the clip, adding some awesome camera flashes where needed. It started as a small idea in Joe Smith's imagination, which was bought to life with the acting skills of Ryan, and the Camera work and technical know how of chris swain and the steady direction of Sam Shaw. The video will soon be uploaded to our blog for everyone to see....


and a big thank you to Alex Foreman for letting us use his name for cast.

evalutation of rough cut thriller

we received both positive and negative feedback on out rough cut. people were nicer than i thought seeing as we hadn't not edited the sequences in the correct order or in time with he music.

A few bits of constructive criticism that appeared more than once was the T.V snow we included in our film title, didn't make much sense... I can see how this is a problem. how we intend to right this wrong is by only including it after a wider shot of the hotel room so the audience have more of an idea of where the telly screen is placed.

On the plus side, everyone was interested in what was going to happen next, so at least we had manged to capture the audience with our narrative, which is the whole point of an intro.

on the whole though, people were confused with the way we set out the clips as they seemed to not flow. and also a title we didn't want showed up on out film which threw everyone off a little. In future we will scan very hard for flaws and mistakes in out peice and make sure the clips flow well.

Our Animatic

Here is our animatic



This is a rough idea of what we want to do. Hopefully the titles will fade in and out so it looks good.

We weren't sure of what it would look like so we put it in a slightly different order on the animatic. We got feedback from the class and we now know that this order is kinda confusing so we will change it.