futher development in our work

we have made a new rough cut as we did not think the one we were presently showing was to the best of our abilities. We have not put any effects on as of yet, however we believe that one shot of the cameraman looking at us is far too bright, so we will attempt to adjust the brightness so it fits better with the feel and mood of the rest of our film title. we will also play with the contrast on some of our shots.